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A Glimpse into my mind
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Date:
2009-03-10 07:55 pm (UTC)
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You get to the mood quickly, but you're using a past, inactive tense. For instance:
"I merged on the expressway right behind a salting truck and once again took note of the colors"
Could be:
"Merging behind a salt truck, I again noticed the color of the expressway."
This is a personal opinion: I like my writing to be concise.
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Date: 2009-03-10 07:55 pm (UTC)"I merged on the expressway right behind a salting truck and once again took note of the colors"
Could be:
"Merging behind a salt truck, I again noticed the color of the expressway."
This is a personal opinion: I like my writing to be concise.