Utter dreck
May. 30th, 2006 07:51 pmDear all mighty. The book I just finished should not have been printed let alone sold to the mass market.
Jayne Ann Krentz "Raven's Prey". Now I admit that I like Romance. I like Jayne most times (though I much prefer her pseudonym Amanda Quick) But this book was beyond horrible
Not quite Nappy Buttocks but close.
The plot had potential. But there was no chemistry between the lead characters other than constant tention and bickering. They don't trust each other. They are always fighting each other and I see no evidence of this "charged passionate tension" between them.
He's a bully, an asshole and major dick head. She's a shrew, a primadonna and a bitch.
He won't listen to her, she is constantly making bitting snap judgements.
He thinks that after one night of get your rocks off that she belongs to him. He forces her to come to his home so she can be with him. She hates him.
Another night of not thinking above the gonads and suddenly she's in love with him.
Uh huh. Riiiiiiiiight.
I can deal with the sudden realizations of love and atraction, but this was ridiculous. There was no real evidence of any attraction up until they are in bed together and even then it seemed forced.
The climax that is supposed to bring the two leads together in the "I can't live without him/her" moment was almost an afterthought.
I should look to see when this one was written. I hope to high heaven that it's one of her VERY early books as I know she can write better. I'm certainly glad I didn't spend money on that book, but took it from mom's collection.
I"ll give it to
dicea so that she can share the pain. What are best friends for?
Jayne Ann Krentz "Raven's Prey". Now I admit that I like Romance. I like Jayne most times (though I much prefer her pseudonym Amanda Quick) But this book was beyond horrible
Not quite Nappy Buttocks but close.
The plot had potential. But there was no chemistry between the lead characters other than constant tention and bickering. They don't trust each other. They are always fighting each other and I see no evidence of this "charged passionate tension" between them.
He's a bully, an asshole and major dick head. She's a shrew, a primadonna and a bitch.
He won't listen to her, she is constantly making bitting snap judgements.
He thinks that after one night of get your rocks off that she belongs to him. He forces her to come to his home so she can be with him. She hates him.
Another night of not thinking above the gonads and suddenly she's in love with him.
Uh huh. Riiiiiiiiight.
I can deal with the sudden realizations of love and atraction, but this was ridiculous. There was no real evidence of any attraction up until they are in bed together and even then it seemed forced.
The climax that is supposed to bring the two leads together in the "I can't live without him/her" moment was almost an afterthought.
I should look to see when this one was written. I hope to high heaven that it's one of her VERY early books as I know she can write better. I'm certainly glad I didn't spend money on that book, but took it from mom's collection.
I"ll give it to
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